A glam of time,
a scum of Life..
Dreams are divine
to be left behind..
We get entangled
in mind’s maze..
pursuing what ever
it compels and says..
flooding our heart
with jerks and aches..
with a hope that
someday it would
be different from
the ongoing hassle..
And will not make
us falter again!!!!
Lovely
π
*grins* this made me smile through!
π
You’ve articulated that flow with extreme perspicacity, and yes, dreams ought to be renounced when they’ve surpassed their lease period. But amazingly, dreams fight back at times or make us fight back rather. It makes life unpredictable but maybe that’s how life is meant to be. Wonderful rendition, I must commend. π
Tushar Kumar Singh
Project Disavowed
i couldn’t agree more Tushar, after all that’s what makes life beautiful and amazing. Thanks for the view. π
beauty lies in simplistic, u proved here yamini with simple words. ” Dreams are divine – to be left behind…” wow…can have N number of deliberations or perceptions here…its still wondering with many thoughts.. Thanks again π
Thanks yashwanth for the view. Beauty also lies in the eyes of the person who sees it.. its good to hear that your words invoke thoughts in others. π
It’s awesome. Specially the rhyme scheme. I also compose poems. π π
check mine – http://www.poetry.com/poets/434325-Nitin%20Balodi/1251575-My-Dream
Thanks Nitin. π Will check out your poems for sure!
ok π